教学活动 教师首先提问学生都知道哪些故事元素,并板书答案。追问:What story elements are mentioned in the passage? 教师分点讲解。 1.首先请学生找出文章中提供背景的内容。教师提供写作建议。 Writing tip 1: Write in time order to make your story more logical (有逻辑的). Writing tip 2: Use adjective words to describe the environment to make your story more attractive (有吸引力的). 2.请学生找出文章中出现的人物。 3.呈现鱼骨图,提示学生寻找事件时要关注动词。最后提供写作建议。 Writing tip 3: Use the simple past tense to tell an event. 4.请学生找出文中表达作者感受的内容,重点讲解hope grew together with his hair,在句中grew hair=grew hope,提问:What rhetorical devices (修辞手法) does the writer use? 教师讲解metaphor,追问:Can you find another metaphor in the passage?请学生翻译标题后,追问:What will Zhou Jian do to "grow happiness again"? 教师提供写作建议Writing tip 4: Use metaphor to show your feelings more vividly (生动地). 5.教师请学生找出作者的观点,提供写作建议Writing tip 5: Use quotes (引用名言) to express (表达) our opinions. 最后师生一起总结写作建议。 |