八年级英语支架式写作教案及课件

八年级英语写作教案：My Most Unforgettable Chinese Spring Festival

一、教学目标 

1. 知识目标 

- 掌握春节相关词汇：family reunion dinner, put up Spring Festival couplets, watch the Spring Festival Gala, get lucky money

- 掌握记叙文写作基本结构：时间地点→活动→感受

2. 能力目标 

- 能运用支架完成80词左右春节经历书信写作

- 能运用简单句型描述春节活动与感受 

3. 素养目标

- 了解春节传统习俗，增强文化意识

- 培养逻辑表达与书面写作能力 

二、教学重难点

- 重点：运用词汇与句型描述春节活动

- 难点：合理组织内容，语句连贯，符合书信格式

三、教学准备

- 多媒体课件、思维导图、写作支架模板、评价量表

四、教学过程（45分钟）

Step 1 导入（5分钟） 

1. 播放春节图片/短视频，提问： 

- What do you usually do during Spring Festival?

- What makes your Spring Festival unforgettable?

2. 引出课题：My Most Unforgettable Chinese Spring Festival

Step 2 词汇与句型支架（10分钟）

1. 词汇支架（板书+课件）

- 时间地点：last Spring Festival, in my hometown, with my family, warm and fine

- 活动：put up Spring Festival couplets, have a family reunion dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala, get lucky money

- 感受：happy, warm, unforgettable, full of joy

2. 句型支架

- It was warm and fine.

- We... together.

- I felt very happy because...

- It was the most unforgettable...

Step 3 思维导图梳理（5分钟） 

- 时间地点天气人物

- 春节活动（贴春联、年夜饭、看春晚、收红包）

- 感受（难忘、温暖、快乐）

Step 4 写作支架模板（10分钟）

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your last email. I had the most unforgettable Chinese Spring Festival with my family in my hometown. The weather was ________.

During the festival, we did many traditional things. We ________ and ________. We also ________. I was happy to ________.

This Spring Festival was ________. I will never forget it.

Yours,

Li Hua

Step 5 学生写作（10分钟）

- 学生独立完成写作，教师巡视指导

- 鼓励适当拓展，保持语句连贯

Step 6 互评与展示（5分钟） 

- 同桌互评，对照评价量表打分

- 展示2-3篇优秀习作，点评亮点

五、板书设计

My Most Unforgettable Chinese Spring Festival

1. 时间地点天气：last Spring Festival, hometown, warm

2. 活动：put up couplets; have dinner; watch Gala; get lucky money

3. 感受：unforgettable, happy, warm 

六、写作评价量表（满分15分）

档次 分值区间 核心要求 加分/特殊说明

第一档

（优秀） 12.5–15分 1.内容覆盖所有要点

2.表达准确、连贯、逻辑清晰

3. 仅个别语言错误 1. 写复杂句/谚语，可加2分（缺1要点仍可进一档）

2. 好句+流畅+全要点，错3个仍可满分

第二档

（良好） 9.5–12分 1.内容覆盖所有要点

2.表达清楚、连贯、逻辑清晰

3. 有少数语言错误 -

第三档

（中等） 6.5–9分 1. 内容覆盖所有要点，表达不连贯、错误较多2. 或内容覆盖大部分要点，表达清楚连贯、少数错误 

第四档

（不及格） 3.5–6分 1.内容仅覆盖部分要点2. 整体表达不连贯

3. 语言错误较多 

第五档

（不及格） 0–3分 1.仅能写零散单词

2.不成句、无逻辑

3. 错误极多 

七、范文（可直接使用） 

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your last email. I had the most unforgettable Chinese Spring Festival with my family in my hometown. The weather was warm and fine.

During the festival, we did many traditional things. We put up Spring Festival couplets and had a big family reunion dinner. We also watched the Spring Festival Gala together. I was very happy to get a lot of lucky money from my parents and grandparents.

This Spring Festival was full of love and joy. I will never forget it.

Yours,

Li Hua

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