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八年级下册!【鼎尖作文教案】修订版来了!

作文

鼎尖教案

名师写作教学方案

鼎尖教案是专业领域里的名品

为师至上,为教立案

内容以详实、丰厚见长

鼎尖作文教案

顶尖作文名师编写

汇聚教案微光

点亮写作星空

《鼎尖作文教案》7-9年级

用五份教案撑起一堂作文课

一经上市,即获好评

思维导图 单元概述

同课异构 升格指导

成果呈现 对接中考

实在是不可多得的宝贵备课资源

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编者的话

七年级下册主编沈建军老师

写作是什么?

也许您会回答:写作是表达自己,写作是交际与对话,写作是读写结合的产物……而我们想对您说的是,写作是一种打开,也是一种疗愈。

写作教学的灵魂是“开发”和“点拨”。写作课的教学是教师帮助学生打开思路的过程,是一个精细化指导学生写作的过程。在这个过程中,教师必须提炼写作核心知识,唤醒学生的写作意识,激发学生的写作热情,激活学生的思维。

本丛书针对统编教材36个写作单元,每个写作单元设计了5个不同的方案,前3个方案就是学生写作之前的“打开写作之门”。

虽说教无定法,可如果教师只凭经验教写作,相当于在黑暗中摸索,打开的也许仅仅是一条缝隙。

相较而言,本丛书中的前3个方案不是打开一条缝,而是针对这个单元的写作实践,从不同角度,有层次有针对性地敞开“写作之门”,最终揭示“写作黑匣子”的奥秘。

写作是一种疗愈,疗愈学生的写作伤痛,疗愈学生的心灵诉求。章熊先生曾经在《中学生言语技能训练》一书中指出:“中学岁月:发展和语病并存。” 

王荣生教授也说,写作能力的缺失一般不是“全局结构”缺失而只是“局部功能”缺失。换言之,绝大多数学生的写作困难通常都只是局部的“梗阻”,而非全体的“坏死”。

我们要相信学生能写出好文章,能把人的内在的一些美好的东西,生命的体验、美好的情思挖掘出来;而教师只要找到合适的教学路径和教学策略,一定能解决写作的疑难问题。

因此,后2个方案是针对学生写完之后存在的“通病”,提供可操作的教学策略和可迁移的写作知识。

 八年级下册目录 

  1. “单元综合概述”版块结合新课程标准、单元主题、单元写作目标,进行了“写作要求解说”“写作目标确认”和“核心知识介绍”。为了更好地对接考试评价,我们还精选了与本单元写作要求相似的中考命题,以拓展写作视域。

2.“同课异构教学方案”重在写前教,每单元给出3个不同的方案,三者基于不同的侧重点同课异构,指向同一个教学目标。教学过程注重学生活动的设计,教学重难点部分用实录的方式呈现,还原教学现场,以有效的写作策略和方法解决实际写作问题。

3.“升格指导教学方案”重在写后教,基于学生写作中真实存在的问题确定教学的重难点,2个方案立足素材,升格指导。经典篇章、教师下水文、学生习作都可以成为升格教学的切入点,以此找到化解学生写作难题的有效路径。

4. “成果呈现与评价”是由段到篇,由日常练习到考场写作。学生习作对应单元写作里“写作实践”的大作文题,结合本单元写作指导的具体要求,以片段和优秀佳作的形式呈现成果。“中考优秀习作”呼应“中考命题示例”,提供一篇优秀考场作文素材供老师们参考选用。

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